The profile I chose to read was on Angelina
Jolie. The profile was published in the year of 2008 so it is a bit outdated.
The profile focuses on her role as a mother and the way her family works. The beginning of the profile starts out by
talking about her pregnancy. It talks about how most women will hate pregnancy
and it continues to talk about how positive pregnancy was for Angelina. After, she speaks about her family life
including her relationship with Brad Pitt and how they manage their family they
have together. They discuss how they work their family and give examples about
how they never have people stay the night. It is just a certain thing they
believe in as a family and it is what works for them. The article also talks
about how family oriented Angelina is. They discuss the controversy over
Angelina and Brad not being married, Angelina states that its what works for
them. The profile then discusses her parenting and how she handles having
children that she adopted compared to the child she gave birth to. It talks
about how she sees no difference. Angelina states that these children are a
gift to her. The article then continues on about her children as well as
details about her childhood life and her mother.
I enjoyed reading this
profile. The profile is extremely positive and lets readers view Angelina Jolie
as a great mother and wife. I was a
little surprised by the length of the profile because it was 4 pages. I know
that profiles tend to be longer than traditional news articles but was still a
little shocked. The profile used many details that captured her beauty as a
mother by using graceful adjectives.
The article covered all of the characteristics of a good profile. While
reading I could really capture her mannerisms, feelings as well as her attitude towards
motherhood and family life. The profile also
gave me a good feel of her personality, almost like I know her. The only thing I
think could be improved would to be focus on just one topic. We learned
that a profile should focus on one specific topic about a person. The profile
jumped around a lot with her pregnancy, adoption process, relationship,
accomplishments as well as information about her mother. Talking about all of
these things made it interesting but I still think it would follow the criteria
of a profile better if they would focus on solely one topic about Angelina Jolie’s life.
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